pause XD

the story will continue :P but now it just matters to see that you improved your dance music skills, good job man :)

Really Cool 10/10

I can really imagine myself gettin' down to this!

Are you sereus?

Alright something to dance to. Its good that your trying new gernes to improve your musci skills. Good Job!
Vote 5/5

Raaaaaaaaaaaaaw! (like a lion)

LOL it's Actually not that raw with at least 6 different levels and lol it does get louder around 1.15 not to bad if that was intentional. It's crazzy like i went from Ah Ahh Ahhh! by Dj Gary McF (lol fast tripy dance track with alot of voice) to this smooth experiment. My heads not in the right place to review proper lol...
Any who, some of the synth melodies were really sweet and could do with speeding up if dance is what your going for, I surgest 180bpm or more. I think this is airing on the side of tecno. Dare you to rack it up after this (so this is the intro) and spin it up fast with some cool affects, look for insparation in other like music, even though your stuff is very indervidaul. If you spot something cool, see if you can recreat that your self, in your style of corse... HAv fun makeing more
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ah simplicity

It was great and simple!