Better

This has a lot of improvement from the first one. It sounds better and more cheerful.
10/10
5/5
Please make a third one.

love it ^_^

Great work, keep it up!

Kind of sounds like Let it Be

As said, the chord progression is generic, and the piano sounds artificial. Also, there's a really stale note at about 0:16. In FL Studio, that can be avoided.

Bare

The chord progression is stock and overused, the piano doesn't change velocities, and doesn't really have a wide dynamic to the music or anything.

It's just kind of bare, even for a loop. I would add some more dynamics. It bores me, to be truthful.

great great,

only problem is is the note played at 00:15-00:16. It's off key.