I decided to try my hand at industrial, so here it is (It's far from finished, I'm just uploading it for a friend and I'll be updating it semi-regularly)
Okay, I've updated it.. Now.. I'm in desperate need of some clang sounds, and maybe some other Industrial elements :c If you guys out there could help me out and get me a clang that would nicely replace the claps I would be grateful :]
Oh, also, this piece is still missing something, but I don't think I have the tools to fix that :/
Needs less repeat...
You tried your hand, but you're going to have to try harder to get the approval you desire.
- Try coming up with some more interesting beats, the overall beat was hardly anything special and it just repeated for a minute.
- Get some more piercing instruments instead of just muffled noise.
Not harsh at all, are we? The comments clearly state that it's a work in progress, and they also clearly state that I am in need of new instruments and sound samples. Try reading next time.
-- Also, I don't appreciate "Fortune Cookie" reviews. :/
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Kioh 
