good but could use work

this song was pretty good and fun to listen too but there were a few things that really stuck out to me. your drum samples for one were really...organic, which surprised me and i wasnt sure if i liked the style, i usually go for more fake drum sounds that have really punchy attacks, i think a kick like that would have sounded better.

lessen the reverb a little on the High hats. the piano in the middle was pretty awesome. and i like the pattern you chose at the end for the kick drum, its kinda hip hoppy and went well.

i thought your leads needed to be turned down in volume a little, they were overbearing. good build at :28 with the snare and crash cymbol.

dont get me wrong this was a good song i just figured you would appreciate a technical review since you seem put alot of effort into your songs and obviously it was well orchestrated so you dont want to hear that. :)

keep up the work!