The first minute was...bleh

But, Once you hit the one minute mark, it was much better. You need a grasp at keeping things in time with each other. The melody at the beginning wasn't even close to being on time.
When the second melody came in, it was better, but kinda repetitive. And when you had that low bass/piano come in at about 2:48, the higher note was REALLY annoying to listen to.
If it was softer, or lower it woulda been better. But liek before, you got much better after that. Beat was kinda bleh.

I'd give you a 5/10. It was good but there is definetly room for improvement.

Plasma

*Just because I have an ear for music doesn't mean I can make it ;)