palatable
if you're into this sort of thing, it's allright. it's really repetitive, and the percussion just shows up out of nowhere which brings a bit of life back into it after you recover from being startled, but then it gets stale really fast again. it's never a good idea to sequentially bring in one little bit after another, because that just makes it stale even faster. you need to make it dynamic, stimulating, because both your melody and your percussion are mildly interesting at first, but they become really dreary, really quickly. your mixing aint bad though, better than most of what i've heard on NG.
Ihsman07 
