I liked it

But it feels like something is missing. It's probably drums, and maybe some other melody above the existing one. Oh, and it ends kinda quickly. But it's a great song. Good work!

Agree with the person below me

I loved the part at 1:24

The song has great potential, but definately needs a more complex percussion.

And this is just my taste, but this song would totally kick ass in my opinion if there were a much deeper bass, even though I know it's hard to get a good deep bass.

Also, what do you use to make your music?

good attempt for a nooby

I recommend taking some mixing tutorials by Warbeats on youtube or something.

Also i would say right off the top of my head you need more than just a low kick for your percussion. And in hats, snares, toms, etc.

I think u did a nice job on your lead sounds though. Keep what you have learned there to add to your new stuff you're going to learn.

I'll vote 5 anyways... :)

Aye

In the intro I was a little put off because it sounded a little too annoying for my taste but it went right in to the good stuff. I really liked this one a lot actually. I wanted it to be longer. You're improving a lot.