It's ok
I know you know it's short, but I'll say it anyway. It's short!
some space here... :D
Anyway, to the actual review. A little enjoyable track you've made here. I like the guitar at some places, but it could need some more work. It seems very, idk, simple and unrealistic. I liked when the drums and the lower tones of the guitar started. It's a little too high-pithed for my taste, but it's quite an ok song.