Here it is guys, PLEASE leave comments.
I want feedback on what you think i did well and what you think needs improvement.
Its the only way i can get better =]
Thanks! and Enjoy!
not bad
i liked that you turned the crowd off.... its annoying when people leave that effect on all the way through the song. I would recommend keeping them off as much as possible.
The overall melody was good and the offbeat bass of course is catchy. The percussion was ok... could be more exciting and varied. - though i'm no shining example of varied percussion.
4/5
good job keep it up and you'll more listens etc.
PM me when you have a good song.
will do =] thanks
typical
hey man not that your song is shit or anything like that but try to use sounds that no1 has used before comepletely original. Also your kick could be a bit harder aswell man. Im not trying to say how good i am or anything but check out my songs chopped or mutant. the kick is crisp and clear yet my songs need work on them aswell.
sry for being "typical" but hey, i use sounds that sound good to me, and if those sounds have been used before...i guess too bad xD
thanks tho =]
Very Nice
The audience intro was very nice, but became excessive when used again. I suggest having a bit more variety with the tune as well.
alrighty, ill def try that =] thanks.
and the tune changes a lot later in the song, its a little repetitive in the beginning, but hey...its trance/ techno-y =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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