could done better

you could of done better with the ending to it you should have put a higher note that a lower note so it sounds happier

Nice job m8

Love the strings in the beginning!! Really inspiring. What drums did you use and what did you use for those awesome strings in the beginning?

Hoho...nice!

Sounds great and all but it is a bit short. I agree with HalcyonicFalconX that you should expand the parts. You should keep making pieces such as this. I can imagine you with another song like this that could be breath-taking. Just need more work and practice and maybe some inspiration, hehe.

Really touching.

You have a wonderful melodic line and a good base for it. Although it certainly needs more work.
For one, it's much too short. I see three sections in this song: Orchestrated first, piano middle, and a violin dominated end. Each of these sections could be expanded to a minute each at least.
I like how the piano is crisp and simple. The transition out of it from 0:51 and 0:54 could be improved though. The snares are fine, yet the piano run would probably sound better if you applied an accelerando to the last second at 0:54.
On the whole, this song is nice, but needs work.

-HFX ^_^

Boredom huh?

You are awfully inspired for someone bored!
Like the others said, This ending is full of emotion! Perfect for a staff roll of
an epic game! good work