First audio post for me, I've been messing with FL for quite a while but never really made anything worthwhile. I started this one with the first two guitars you hear, and then I just kept tacking on guitars. The final product has 5 guitars of varying styles and sounds and a set of drums.

I see it as a group of kids who think themselves to be rough and tough in an industrial smoked-clogged city. Each guitar has times when it's dominant and times when its quiet, like a group of boys would be in my opinion.

I know it could use MAJOR improvement, I just can't put my finger on what I should be doing with it. Assistance?