After uploading this yesterday, and reading the reviews it got, I decided to revamp this song to make it less...raping to your ears. I changed some of the instruments, and fixed the automations up a bit. I also placed it under a different genre, more fitting to the, well...genre of the song. The song's been very...metallicized.

I've also added in an instrument or two, so let me know what you think about it this time NG. And I know it won't be a massively excited reply, it's not that great of a song. It's just me starting to learn things, and I want some input.

Anyway, enough of me yammering on, listen, vote, review. My work depends on your response.
Also: the thing in the beginning is just something random I put in for the sake of randomness, don't worry about it.

--Van

Edit: Apparently, I didn't readjust the automations enough, especially in the beginning. It's on my list of repairs :/