Hey,
You should host this up on filefront for me in its full version ^_^ For real. I know you said its a mid-secion from a long song, but that means you need to post the full version up ya? XD
Onto the real review. I liked the strings you put in and love the notes put in near the end, its just an utter shame I couldn't get to hear the rest. I'd make a bigger review, but its a short 'song' :<