i spent no time on this.
dont be too harsh.
and if it gives you a headache, your not the only one one.
"i wanna lolio wit my lolipop"
neat.
its neat, and has a decent chance at becoming better, after you progress your skills a bit you could come back to this and make a very nice melody out of it, i like where it is going, and i feel with time it would be good. but now, i cant give you more then a 3, and a 6, keep at it man!
ill be checking out your other stuff as well, i like where this could have gone!
Its rather minimal
It could use more instruments, some better samples, and a more listener-friendly melody. But i think your on the right track!
yea i know. it only had like three instruments and drums. haha. but i only spent a hour on it. you cant expect much. but thanx. and yes, my other stuff is MUCH better
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
a10fjet 
