got potential

The lead notes fit great in this tune, maybe you gotta tune it thought :D
Dont stop, keep doing, you'll get there!

Awesome Beat

Nice Rythm you have going here. I don't notice anything wrong with it, then again, I haven't had much taste for music. I like almost anything.

its pretty good quality...

But a lot of the chords sound like theres a few really wrong notes in there, and a lot of it is out of time

other than that its its pretty good