Shame.... SHAME I SAY!!!

Ok, so you're not a great guitarist, whatever, BUT WHERE'S THE BADASS BASS TRACK?

You, sir, have betrayed the ENTIRE RHYTHM SECTION.

From this day forward, may your name be recorded in the annals of the lazy, who, NOT ONLY failed to apply awesome to his native instrument in the recording, ALSO failed to do so for a fellow BROTHER in the rhythm section.

Guitar's not bad. A little blankly "Blackety black"

Not horrible... but it could do with a little more range in the variation instead of just repeated patterns.

I think this is cool.

This has a ton of potential man. Could be pretty epic. IN TRUE guitarist style, it appears laziness has got the best of you. haha.
I say you you should clean this up, cause its pretty cool. And you aren't that bad. I've heard a lot worse by people calling themselves guitarists.

If you ever decide to revamp this, I would gladly lend a hand in the guitars department, if you wanted..

Current Score

4.37 / 5.00 (+ 0.0085)

Great!

As a fan of hard music I must say that you've done great! The melody is interesting to listen to and has the drive! And of course the refrain sounds original and has a good motive.
Too bad the quality isn't the best, you could also find a singer for this theme, I think it would be a great song with good lyrics. Very emotional!

Nice

Loved the mood change halfway through - good job keeping the overall "tone" but mixing it up with a little more uplifting rhythm.

not only a peace of shit

this a good peace of shit, a drummer plays guitar? why not its hearable
it could better
keep it up
:D