As promised, the full version of my hardstyle track. I took most advise, and just started from scrap, but I used the same melody. It's longer now, and imo a lot better.
Oh, when you listen to this, make sure to leave a review. Tell me what I did right, and most important, what I did wrong. I'm trying to progress as much as possible.
Greetz,
agnryfaic
Okay...
It's not the hardest of hardstyles. What you need is a nice bass, playing that on the off beats (the "&'s" of "1 & 2 & 3 & 4 & 1 & etc"), and if you've got an EQ on the kick, put some more high tones in it. I usually cut out 700Hz with EQ. Good work, though.
Sure, I'll just try that, thanks ;)
It gets very boring after minute 3
Sorry but the audio gets very boring after minute 3, and it gets tired after hearing the same beats over and over. The song had potential but it ended repetitive and almost annoying. At first the audio is great but again, it gets boring.
An OK job, though.
C52
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Aww, guess I overdid it with the whole ''longer track'' thingy :p
Oh well, thanks for the rev ;)
Hard indeed
Certainly a hard, pumping beat, that has beaten the soft, grey matter between my ears into submission.
I think that you could have done with a few more bits and pieces of the tune, when you didn't have the driving beat, as aside from the driving beat, you had some other good tools to drive the tune along. An awesome cracking beat and the melody that came through at about the 2 minute marker. Sadly, when other parts of the tune increased in volume, you couldn't hear it, which was a real shame.
If you focused on these more subtle parts, I think this song would be brought a lot further forward. At least it's something to work on for the next version.
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Yeah, a couple of more hours of finetuning would've worked like a charm. Sadly, I'm a lazy bastard, so I didn't D:
Thanks for the rev ;)
cool
I liked the bass in this track, but it really needs some more structure to it, and when the structure does get into this song during the second half it sounds really good, but the song gets too dependent on it and it gets boring, add some variation to it and you'd have an amazing song
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A'right, I'll do that next time. I'm through with this track though, I'll just start a completely new one.
Thanks for the rev y0 ;)
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The bass in this track is amazing. But sadly this track lacks some melodies. The first two minutes or so there's absolutely no melody, just the kicks. This gets boring pretty quickly.
When finally the melody sets in it isn't diversified enough to keep me interested in the song.
The track is over 5 minutes long, but it isn't happening enough to justify this length.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
agnryfaic 
