Murder Is Wrong

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Murder Is Wrong

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Hi, I'm a fat, southern guy with some guitars, a computer, an a free recording program called Audacity. I hope you enjoy my stuff, and if you don't. Tell me why you don't. Just tell me. It's okay. You won't get flamed. Really. Just tell me how you think I could improve.

Everything is improvised, so woot.

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Slappy8962

2009-01-16 18:57:13

Realy!!

I think that this song would be beter if
you listed the positives of murder.
With all kiden aside....
cut lose!! it sounds like your holden back vocals
put some emotin in it

TheHFCB responds:

The song was not meant to be a power metal anthem. Also, if you would read the other comments, you would know I was trying to be quieter due to people being around. Also, [better], [kidding], [loose], [holding], [emotion]

PoisonSky

2008-10-10 12:26:04

It's not dramatic enough.

It's a little too quiet and stuff but it's OK

Good epic moral, though and it gets better so.... 8/10, I think.

TheHFCB responds:

Thanks, I was trying to be a little quieter, because there were people around the house and I don't like to let people I know hear me sing, stupid I know, but thanks alot for the review!

RikuTMW

2008-10-09 03:29:38

Nice

It's not very catchy in my opinion, but it was a nice improvisation :P

Good job!

TheHFCB responds:

Thank you, I didn't really intend it to be such, but I thought I would do a song with a positive message instead of my typical Spinal Tap/Tenacious D/ God knows what-formula. Thanks for reviewing!

SessileNomad

2008-10-09 01:33:12

nice

you and your guitar both sound like streetlight manifesto

you should be in a ska band, your guitar would be aweosme in one

TheHFCB responds:

Thanks, I guess. Ska isn't really my bag, but thanks alot!