A shame it's so short

The real issue with this tune is that it is only 30 seconds long. Without wanting to sound unfair or anything, it doesn't loop, so you've lost out on both aspects - if it were about 2-3 minutes long, it would be acceptable as a tune. Otherwise, if it was looping well, it wouldn't sound so... off.

I think that the tune that you've presented is nice, with a few bits and pieces that sound like you've thought about a Toxic Biohazard and how people responding to such an alert would be like. I think you've encapsulated that initial panic, but it's the aftermath that you want to take further and expand upon.

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promising

this piece would be much better if you tidied it up some, the intro sounds really good but it gets way to messy, and doesn't loop well, just take out some sounds during the messy parts and add something to it to make it longer and fix the loop

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The beginning sounded very promising, but at around 0:13 it gets way too messy. There is too much going on at once so it's quite hard to make out the melodies.

Also, the song is too short in my opinion and it doesn't loop. Try to expand the song a bit by making the parts a bit longer. Also try to get the mixing done a bit better.

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Well :(

I've never played Biohazard, but I will give you the benefit of the doubt that this is related in some way. D: In my opinion it just sounded way too messy. There was a lot going on all at once and some of it just didn't fit together. It maybe even made it sound just a bit distorted. I think you should maybe clear it up a little bit by removing something or just by not having everything run together as you had it.

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Nice job, I can envision this being used in a power plant level or an evil factory in a video game. Good job on the synths.