A decent effort

It's not that bad for the first twenty seconds. Some of the notes clash, and in some special places the rhythms sound like they get tangled up. It's all very interesting, but not typically good.

My advice is choose one scale and stick to it most of the way through a song. Also synchronize your melodies with your beats, it sounds better. You don't have to though... the song is okay, it just could be better.