Score: 9
"Not bad."
date: November 8, 2009
Club/rave music isn't really my genre, but I'm trying to be impartial here, so I'll give you a nine instead of a seven.
Something that can be improved: Add some more counter melodies. There's only 3 lines of notes that I can hear. And while that's fine and dandy, adding more lines of music would make this sound a whole lot better. Also, the entire song is in pretty high pitch, except the bass line, so adding a lower-pitched line would balance out the ringing in my ears (although sometimes ringing in ears is a good thing).
Might wanna try incoporating some different rhythms from the original song into this one. That would make the loops a lot more interesting.
Okay, good things: You followed the original piece quite well. Most notes were hit perfectly. The chords were nice. The tempo was awesome. This is probably the prime example of turning a piece of music into club music. Good job.