hmmmmm what to sayyyy

I think it is an alright song, but its just to repetitive for me and the drums have the same beat for a minute and thirty seconds. really i think you have potential but you just need some good inspiration. On a more critiquing note, you are to loud when you put in an individual riff, like you have two guitars or something and ones playing something different than the chorous but the one thats playing the course is drowning out the one that people want to hear. I would say more but i have to go