I liked some of the synths you used...

But that's about it...
It got very repetitive and it just started getting really annoying about 30 seconds in. Also seems like the back beat is too low. I agree with the review above that the best parts were towards the end, but a good song doesn't hook you at the end you know?

Work on your arrangement and your mix.
With that said, be sure to check me out as well :) Chow!

okay...

it got better near the end..