high 10

nice job some work here and there but not enough to complain about

Good, so far.

I will be honest and say that the kick in the beginning is uncomfortably loud. Do you have a limiter on the master track? I believe it's upping the kick level higher than it needs to be. Other than that, sounds are generally good, especially the bass. I like the bass. The panning on the hats is a nice touch. In the last 15 seconds or so, I would make the rhythm of the melody more defined, as opposed to freestyle-esque. Definitely expand upon this and build up slowly. Tis all, nice work. :)

Like your "house"

a generic drum sound of the house style the synth part begins simple then get better I just have two things to say extend the sound(obvious) and get quick with the final version

First Try? wow

Wow. This is really good for a first time. Keep at it.
BUT, I do suggest you make it longer because it sounds more like a song than a loop.