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Okay, no offense, but it sucks.
You've got a good keyboardist and melody, but the drums and guitar need some serious work.
ya we seirous we did this in a half hour with the crappiest drum set, guitar, and keyboard alive and the drummer didnt' take lesons (me) and the guitarist had a very mediocre guitar teacher and the keyboard is half broken. We would like constructive criticism. And I don't mind bad ratings as long as they explain why this is bad. Thank j00
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Okay, no offense, but it sucks.
You've got a good keyboardist and melody, but the drums and guitar need some serious work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.