SMB3 - Big Island v2

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SMB3 - Big Island v2

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This is what I'd like to call a major overhaul on the abomination that I released here a few days ago. which, If you'd like to listen to is still up.

The theme of Big island from Super Mario Brothers 3.

I'd apreciate any feedback/critisism anyone is willing to give.

I know the Sound clips are mario are a bit low in qualtiy and volume, and specifically, I'm not liking the res kick heard early in the song too much. But I wanted to get some feedback.

Thanks in advanvce

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ninjakoopa-33

2008-09-03 19:42:46

Here's what I think....

First off, the Big Island theme is good and all, but I don't think it's good to make it into a song that's over 3 minutes. A short loop would've been better. Listening to this for 3 minutes is just annoying.

Sound clips, you know they're not at the right volume, but another thing is the timing. Some voices fit in right, but most of them are just out of place.

About volume, some parts are a little high-pitched. 0:54 and also at 2:17 is what I'm talking about. Try to keep the volume balanced.

That's all I got for constructive criticism.
5/10
2/5
Sorry for the low score, but this needs a lot of improvement.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Seltzer responds:

Thanks for The feedback! I'll keep this in mind when I work on a new song after I'm done with my flash project.