i think

it needed to be open a little more. cause it sounded low quality, but its not really... but i think you deserve more than <2.3 that you have now. cause the later part is pretty cool, but it just doesnt seem like trance cause theres barely a steady bassline. i would make it ambient

dandy

As long as you made the melodies yourself and didn't use loops, I think they were fine, but there were barely any trance synths in the song haha. This is more ambient chillout than trance, but either way, your melodys do work together, so you have a pretty good understanding of how things fit together and you have an ear for it.

Now just work on some better synths, the only one that was really not that great was the bass. The melody was ok, but the synth sucked.

Anyways, keep producing.

hmmmmm

that a little.. what i call 'Mono' kind of music. and the notes are a bit too high (and sometimes too low) to mark it as Trance. but hey, this is your first time at trance huh? at least you got one part right... the fast Sprit of trance :D