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Any type of suggestions, tips, even negative feedback.(That just mean I'm just not doing something right)
I hope to make a lot of good songs in the future. Any support would be nice.

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Potential Equals Greatness

First beat posted to NG huh? Well Im not the best beat producer out there but check it bro. You structured this song really well. I am going to assume you use FL Studio? I would say the only thing this track is missing really is diversity in melody and a stronger beat sequence. If you can capitalize on those two things for your next post I can almost guarantee you will be loved by the HHM Sec. So keeping coming bro. Oh and you get a 5 from me.

Sir-Joinz responds:

thanks man. i seem to always have a problem with repetition. But I've been working on it. As far as the beat sequence......I don't want to talk about it lol. I will however though keep at it, I love making beats so expect more. Thanks for the review Mike.

Good first try

I suggest to keep a sustainable melody, and a bass line.

Sir-Joinz responds:

I thought the melody was solid, but the basslin is only ok, this i know :P Thanks for the review man.

ummm

ok well ummm
you do have potential it's just that
everything you put in just kind of happen and when they all start playing it sounds messy. The thingf you add in dont flow right with each other and the claps you put in kind of make this sound...... off beat and a little off balance.
Keep working at it

listen to this beat by a Dsmokes (have you heard of him?)
http://www.new grounds.com/audio/listen/231075 ]take out the space]
anyways that's what i think about when i heard some of your other stuff

Peace
d[-_-]b

Sir-Joinz responds:

This is actually my first beat ever. I didn't even know anything about levels and volume syncs and what not. I've heard that beat before. Yea, I guess it does kinda remind you of some of my other stuff(or vise versa) Either way, thanks for the constructive review.

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sorry, boring as hell, i guess wel made but off beat redundant and boring.

Sir-Joinz responds:

Yea, I tried to switch it up a little bit but, I use to use this to freestyle with and i didn't want to make anything to random and varried you know. Thanks for the review.

Good!

This is a nice piece dont see how people dont like it good job on this one!

Sir-Joinz responds:

Thanks, idk why either. but hey, what can you do sides' make one better.

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Votes
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Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 24, 2008
3:26 PM EDT
File Info
Song
4.9 MB
2 min 8 sec

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