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This is my sophomore musical effort, and far superior to the first imo. I dont claim its that great, but please give it a listen. And i would really like some reviews, especially suggestions to improve.

I also intend on getting better recording stuff, because using an mp3 player to record keyboard playing isnt quite doing it for me. If any of you like it enough, ill re record it someday.

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rowan-wietze-hummel

2009-01-24 22:56:57

hmmm sounds good

record it digital cus it sounds awesome i would love here good quality il give ya a 8

twiddely-man responds:

wow... its been a long time since i've been to ng actuallly. and um, yeah, thanks, im glad you like it. it sucks to have halfway decent compositions hindered by the audio quality. like, even if the listener DOES like it as a song, its not really listenable =/

and i really would love to be able to record it digital, but i lack the necessary equipment, and i've had so little free time to find out how to do it. but my birthday is coming up in just over a month, so maybe i can have some better tools at my disposal then?

i don't know. i have music in progress, but i have yet to figure out /exactly/ how they go. im thinking i'll should be able to submit something by may, and it will sound much better, both in composition and clarity. but the way things go, it probably will take longer than that.

CriticalHit

2008-08-23 18:55:30

Nice

Not bad. The song's kind of "drowned", though, with the tones being too mellow. It could also use something in the background; this is just a melody. Overall, though, I'll gibe you 8/10 and 4/5.

twiddely-man responds:

i know who you are! thanks for reviewing. i know, youre right. its not completely my fault the tones are drowned... i think ill rerecord it with something crisper sounding like a music box.

see, i have to play it, and i completely lack the skill to play a melody and a beat or bassline as well. im completely self taught at piano...

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its not my intent to keep making excuses though... i'll learn... stuff...