Hey awesome

I like the way you play the instruments on top of each other.
Excellent violin solo.
Great way to bring the other instruments after the solo.

me like......

i like it except madness isnt supposed to be happy htough would be good for a madness nonsense parody. Like madness lollyland which is hilarious.

(whats with all the techno and dnb almost all the songs are those)

Beautiful

This song was just wonderful. All the instuments sound great, especially the violin. I love violin. 5/5, 10/10, instant fav.

Very well thought out

This is really great. I'm not reviewing it as a MAC entry, but as a piece of music itself. I love the transitions and the violins sound beautiful. I'm not sure if this track fits as a loop though. I'd much rather hear a true ending rather then the music cutting out all of a sudden.

Hmmmm

Your on the right track, but your still lacking the Madness feeling. Like for instance, a lot of people are missing the idea that Madness is suppose to be like Heavy Metal kind of Hardcore; while yes, your sound does seem a little sinister the violins ruin it. I'm not saying violins are bad (you can thank the audio experts of Bioshock for that). What you should try doing is making all the instruments lower pitched, I downloaded your song, put it in Windows Media Player and slowed it down, and it definitely sounded more sinister in a way but not as faced paced and with poorer quality (but that was to be expected)

All I'm saying is you should make it as menacing as possible, try looking up Cheshyre in the audio portal. He was the original artist for most of the Madness songs (as you've probably already heard) he also has a number of songs that would be suitable for any Madness submission.

NOTE: ALL THE MADNESS SONGS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON "MOOD"

A MOOD THAT CREATES EITHER UNCONTROLLABLE RAGE AND CHAOS OR UNDENIABLE FEAR AND CORRUPTION...
(your headed more into the direction of Fear and Corruption)