Nice

It's all good...

However, as the others said, there are off beat beats, and the drums aren't in the right places. or they are not tuned right. There are too many things going on at several parts and it gets terribly hard to understand it. The main parts are really great, but you over flow them in several places. The ending was good, but the beating nose is off and should be taken out.

Overall, it's a nice song, i'm sure if you take in some of the comments, you could make a great final version. =)

it's ok...

i honestly don't think that this belongs into the "video game" genre, 'cause i can't imagine the song with some video game...
anyway, it was ok in the beginning, but somewhere in the middle you screwed it up...
still good work!

could be better

ya got the melody perfectly but that squelchy backround noise is terribly distracting.
If you fix that this song would be great.