8 Bit sounds?

Werre those 8 bit sounds used in the begiining? Nah.. nevermind. It was a col song at first, but all the dissorented sounds after that really messed up the feel to it. I see you were trying to create a dissorented sound and fell, so that you could bring in a really cool build up and finish with that large beat sound, but it just didnt fit in like you were trying to make it. You also brought in many random sounds, like out of nowhere, that didnt fit in with the song at all. If you combined all these noises together in better harmony, you could make one sweet awesome hip-hop song.

Good luck!

YOOO!!

Hey im Mike lil bro, this is kool, a lil equalizing, but yo a fast pace and a nice beat, heheh i like. Mike would appreciate this. good job

Safe mate...

Ite Treadz dont know if ya remember me but its "kidhype"

well that account broke and this is ma new one

Im gunna start making beats soon again so ill keep check if ya dew tha same.

Btw u live near leicestershire dont ya cuz i live in leacestersire aswell...

Peace

hollaback at me.

Awsome

Really like the beat and the rain in the beggining n just the whole song and everything about it :) iv never heard the origenal but i assume its good but that sound that comes in about 1:17 is a bit outa place.

-=Instinks=-