Sounds great!!
The only thing that I can say made me loose the feel is when you kind of cut the instruments off at about 1:58. You could do a short drum fill there with double bass or snare build up and then play a variation off of the melody you have going on after that or something. Maybe use a different instrument to play the variation with the melody you already have playing behind it. Overall this song is definitely great!! I love the progressions you chose!!!!! Can't wait to hear the finished song!! :D