Score: 9
"Hmmm."
date: August 15, 2008
Tee hee. Hai 2 u.
Mkay. Nice leap forward. You're getting a bit more concerned with the ambience/melody of the song than the actual breaks. Not a bad thing. Not bad at all.
In this case this would most certainly come off as Ambient dnb, if that. It's a decent piece, but some of the sounds were out of balance. No proper impact to give the flow some sway. Sway is the motion in DnB that picks you up and makes you want to do a Windmill pump on the floor when you got 50 glowsticks around your body.
Really great potential is brewing in you. You're starting to seriously improve.
I'm not exactly a veteran myself, but I will tell you this, don't worry about making the beat sounding 'cool' as much as you should about making it stir something inside you. That is the key to any music. There's fun music, there's hollow music, there's bad music and then there's music that makes you WANT to buy the cd rather than download it.
Try fiddling with the instruments, see what happens :)
Good track. Keep up the good work dewd. Peace.
-CO
August 19, 2008
Author's Response:
:D You're my favorite reviewer lol thanks