this is actually not bad ;D

Word?

reduce bass a tad
if you wanted to dj raves
you totally could with shit like this
keep it up

yix1337 is right

You can do so much more with this. Reduce the bass a tad because it is causing a lack of sound on the melody channel. Please work on this a bit more then try again.

u fart on my ears

>_< whta the F. is this !!!

i liked it, but i also didnt like it

This track has loads of potential, and could be alot better. I liked the 8-bit sound feel of it and the built up wasnt bad, however the sould levels and frequencies were all over the place! I first noticed this when the hithats / shakers came in, they seemed a bit too loud, you should probably turn them down a little, and when the bassline came in I could feel it, the tune wasn't bad, but man, the levels were too loud, you need to turn the bass down. there is a definate clash of frequencies in this track, that makes it hard to listen to (i had to stop half way through cos it hurted my ears lol), you need to EQ this better.

If you want something like the bassline to be heard because it was too quiet, DON'T turn it up, turn everything else on the same frequency down. Only turn it up as a last resort, because if you turn it up (like you have, the levels of the sound will just blast at the ears and the conflicting frequencies will send the track all over the place. This is a worhty track, but need far better mastering and EQing.

Im not saying your track is bad, but it still needs a lot of work to perfect.