OK

It was a good song, although the main beat really didn't fit in. You ever play a game called General's? Because the main beat sure souded like one of the songs from the game. If thats where you got your inspiration that's fine by me. I'm just saying it really needed a different tune in the backround although I'm not sure what. Anyway good job, need some improvements though.

4/5

NergiZed

Good name, among other things...

I loved the reference to jack black, just in the descript, and just because I wanted to point that out.

Overall good song.

<tips hat to you>

Azaziel