Hm...

There's barely anything to criticize, you'll need to expand on this one considerably - although it has potential there's very little substance here. For the short jingle it is it's not bad, but not good.

Eh?

Well, not much to go with... Try coming back with more substance?
Criticizing just what's there... is kind of hard.
I'd have to say, it's got potential, as most things do. The question is, are you going to expand upon this rather small "gingle?"

good

very good beat