Interesting
To be honest when i first listened to this is saw within my mind a forest lush with growth and a slightly cloudly vibrant blue sky.
the view was from a rock slightly above the ground bathed in sunlight watching all the coming and goings of various animals and the effect of wind upon all creation...
I probably go into to much detail but it does have a great rpg feel to it and i can definately see the ocean that goes in the sky.
You have done well and the whole piece loops nicely though the pause is noticable...maybe slightly less pause next time?
anyway it is a good piece and you should be happy with your creation