I love fruity loops. Everyone should.

I'm a Fruity Loops guy myself so this should be interesting...

Okay, that sounds like the 'plucked' vst, oh, and simsynth...

Actually, this song reminds me a lot of my earlier stuff when I was just messing around, trying to figure out how everything worked.

Nice use of the bass there, I like how it's understated, but it works.

The melody... is kind of hard to follow, I guess... some of it sounds really kind of random, some of it's definatly dischordant, and the rest is pretty respectable.

The drums are a bit basic, but that's not really a bad thing... I like the cool little rolls that you've got starting around :58, by the way.

So overall... this gets a six. Not because it's bad, or anything, but because I'll bet after messing around for another week you could have something better. And the same goes for the week after that, etc. Keep it up - you've definatly got potential.