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Thanks to all my friends who helped me. It's not perfect but I'm getting closer to what I would like to hear from myself.

Maybe I achieved something. Sorry for the low bit rate its a long song.
Hope you enjoy(ed) it, review and vote fairly please.

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Average Score: 9.7 / 10

Score: 9

"I liked it, but.."

by: joltjob

date: July 23, 2008

I really got an Above & Beyond feeling with this song, great job!
But.. (and here it comes >:P) around 4:50 the piano-solo comes in, and that's where the feeling all goes away. Maybe it's just me (and it probably is, according to alot of people), but it doesn't belong in this song.
Although I didn't like the solo, the piano-cord playing at around 3:00 is great for this song! Maybe try to make a main-lead in place of the solo the next time (but that's just my opinion ;))

9/10 and 5/5 from me!

July 25, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah I've been thinking of shortening it and removing the piano solo completely. Still on my mind to do so.

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Score: 10

"Your Eyes Entrance Me."

by: Rakyth

date: July 15, 2008

And they do a very good job of entrancing me ;)
(In my opinion, it was only slightly too much percussion. Only slightly. It'd be kind of hard to get it lower without sacrificing background sound, and so, you found the best way to do it, in my opinion._.)

Keep making Perfection!

July 15, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to make things even better with my next song(s).

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Score: 9

"lol"

by: xBluePhantomx

date: July 12, 2008

there were some parts were i though the sounds didn't go together well... then i realized that i had been listening to Entrance Me and Your Eyes at the same time. as for the actual song by itself, its great! the only problem with it is that its a bit long. i listened to this because of the note on Entrance Me like flahlover45 below me and even looking at his answer is took me a while to understand.

July 12, 2008

Author's Response:

This is a little long but its not that long for Trance.

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Score: 10

"man"

by: flahlover45

date: July 10, 2008

if they make a rave category, thissl be the first one to go on it. awesome.

p.s. I listened to this one cuz of the artists note on "entrance me". is it that it makes "Your eyes Entrance me"? aww shit man you should make that your next song that would be fuckin WIN

July 10, 2008

Author's Response:

I'd put this in the progressive trance category if it existed.

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Score: 10

"its good"

by: cc2132

date: July 9, 2008

soods great and its good for partys that need to calm down thanks for the save dude

July 9, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you too.

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