Neat.

If you dropped the kick, added some generic dnb rhythms and threw this into the video game genre, you'd get a lot better reactions. =D

Or... Slow it down, drop the snare like an eigth note and put it in hip hop. Just a thought.

You have a knack for coming up with neat melodies, but this is just really repetitive. GAH I cant get over how terrible the kick sounds. >_>

has a sweet kick to it

keep up the good work man

voted 4

OK song, but needs work.
I liked the feel of this song. Kind of jazzy really. I don't know why, but I got the jazz feeling for some reason.
The melody was interesting, although simple it gave the song some body. The bass is what really caught my ear. It was very dominant. A good thing in some cases, but I'm not too sure about this one. It seemed a little too dominant for the melody.
The percussion, work on that. I honestly didn't like it at all. The kick was wayyyy too strong. You need to EQ and master that, or either get a completely new one. The snaps were an interesting choice, I liked that.
You seemed to have overused the reverse cymbal as well as the crash itself. Especially towards the end.
Overall decent song. You are getting better, but you need to fine tune before you can progress.
Keep up the good work.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)

Hey

Read your review on my song,, so here I am, to review yours, and achieve a cookie.
So...Really liked the song. Sounds very happy :D
The title... is...kinda...
awesome. lol
Great stuff keep it up
5/5
9/10

cookie

LoL

Awesome name lol.. And good work Its all good The melodies are good, And with good effects I think that it might have been a bit to repetitive. So maybe In the future You work variation of the melodies that you use.. But in the end its all good.

Have A great Day!

XenoxX :)