As mentioned before, the only way to record this is to hold a mic up to the speakers, and I know that that means the quality isn't brilliant. All I'm looking for are ways to improve the song itself.
Other than that, enjoy. :)
Btw, that funny sounding bit that comes in after a few seconds is supposed to be an alto voice. Please PM me if you have any suggestions for lyrics. Ta!
The sound quality
The sound quality matches the rest of the song for some reason. I mean hell it sounds like your spinning a vinyl or listening to a recording from a long time ago. It really matches for some reason to me. If you do get vocals are you gonna actually sing them and re-submit this or what?
Well, it's an alto part, and I'm a 15 year old with a broken voice, so I may have to get my sister to sing it, or transpose it for my range.
But yeah, might do...
woah!
pretty simple, not many instruments were used, but i love how you used them =P,
The random sound every now and then reminds me of a gun kind of reloading or something, the tune of the music matches the title so ye, nice naming.Nice work =)
Random sound?
That was probably me moving the mic, but we don't tell people that one....
This ones better
This ones a hell of a lot better than your last submission, its sounds a lot better and the use of different instruments is really good.
However, i think its just the program your using to compose the music just isnt very high quality, it doesnt sound real and it just sounds like a synthesizer playing.
The quality of the recording is ok so you shouldnt worry about that but i think maybe you should look for an alternative program to use
But other than that youve got the right idea
Yeah, my last submission was a 1 week project, this one was 1 month, although admittedly I didn't pour all of my time into it.
I will look into better programs, but the simple truth is that, at my age, I simply cannot afford them.
I WILL persevere, though.
Thanks :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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