This is some BGM I made for a visual novel I'm making. Made this in the last hour and something minutes so it isn't anything that spectacular. Critiques are welcomed, and is actually wanted more than people just hitting 5.
Well I didn't find anything wrong with it...
It's sounds great to me. Really lovely and peaceful.
I can see in your library you have quite a few "Forlon" Songs...is this part of the Visiual Novel? If so, What's happening with it and where can I find updates?
Music makes a huge difference on stories and this is awesome!
I'm slowly trudging along with the story right now between work and school. I made a blogspot for it, but haven't even touched it in a long time. Just hope that I finally get around to releasing something early 09. Just don't expect it to be big, as I only have gotten about 76 pages worth of stuff written, and I'm 3/4ths done.
Notbad
This is cool but i feel the sound is far too low at the start and somewhat throughout it all, but it sounds ok, keep up the good work.
Abit low but good stuff.
~X~
Yet if it was too loud, then the atmosphere is lost from the song.
Hmm.
Wonderful music for a novel.
It takes you and puts you right into a fantastic world.
5/5 8/10
favorite'd
very heart warming.
Fun to listen to and could almost just picture walking around the house a normal day in a video game or something. Great RPG music and i could see this being used in flash movies all over newgrounds. Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Koji98 
