Needs a melody
You've got a rythm, but you need a melody too. That would make the song interesting. Without melodies, they're just annoying reptetive things. All musicians know that.
a rocking boss battle song for a game plz tell me improvements i can make.
Review -LS-
Needs a melody
You've got a rythm, but you need a melody too. That would make the song interesting. Without melodies, they're just annoying reptetive things. All musicians know that.
well thanks for giving me ideas of wat i can improve
Boom
I'd say, at the beginning, after that series of six hit-things, add a louder, more energetic and singular (as opposed to repetitious) part that suggests someone slamming their flaming foot into their opponent's nose. Then get on with the rest of the song.
It still wouldn't work entirely, but that's one thing I'd like.
well thanks for giving me ideas of wat i can improve
hint:make a longer version
1 thing :make it longer
i hope that's better than this
Too short
And even then you made it repetitive. Sorry, but it just doesn't work for me.
ok thanks for the review i dont care abot the score i just care about improvements i need
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