atroscious

Great beat, but the rhymes and flow is horrible. Its like listening the radio. The chorus is good though. eww the verses are so corny. Its a disgrace to rap. You need to up your vocabulary, and up you're speed, add some consistent rhyming, and not sound like you're trying so hard.

Rap isn't about putting dicks in pussies or being colder than an iceberg, its expressing how ill you are in as many rhymes as you can in very original ways. Talkin like lil wayne aint ganna get you anywhere. Atleast not in my book.

docta docta

hot trax shout outs to corey and kellz up on the track danger on da track killin it

Awesome!

Nice job! I really liked it! This is really creative, 5/5!!

Please review my newest song, Crunky Yo Face, its on the portal! Thanks!