good,but...

needs more instruments, like a battery

Good work!

Good song and awesome Idea. I liked it!

yeah

its a good start, i like to hear more VG hip hop Tracks. Keep at it and you will eventually get better and better. 9nd it!

It is fun but...

It is just so boring in some kind a way it needs more speed more party style like if the sound is like dik it would be like dik dik dik dikadik that is a little more fun but you should still make music :)

Pretty good, although I dun like hip hop.

Needs a little bit more, though. Seems kinda empty.