constructive critisism
I don't know if it's my laptop or the song itself but the sound quality isn't on par, at all, in fact, that's what's killing the song for me, but I gave you a 7 for how well the song was put together, even though it got pretty repetitive, but still, it's original for you. Next time, make sure the sound quality isn't so inconsistent and add more of a variety of style and sounds
SUMMERY: sound quality and reptitiveness
Good luck on your next song, and I'll be waiting for it to come out and see how much you have improved ^^