Suggestions huh?
I like music that has some order to it, to keep it all together, but what makes me love a song is when it sounds chaotic, almost messy or unpredictable. A good example would be Horse and Goat by Venetian Snares, not just that song but the whole album may inspire you. Even if you don't like it, I'd say it's something very unique, and is worth listening to. Anyway, not bad for a demo!