Good, very good

I hate to agree with what the others said, the notes clash in spots and it sounds out of tune sometimes, but nevertheless its very good.

hmmm

its either to much tremolo, or you didn't tune the guitar. Thats the same sound i get when i play a guitar thats been sitting in a dusty corner for 3 works.

It really hits this in the jugular. You might want to try this again.

((VOTED4))

I really liked where you were going with this song, the guitar was played very smooth and melodically. It all had this nice relaxing feal to it that I enjoyed very much. It's just the song was way to short. There is no getting around that. You got to at least try to tack on another minute or so onto the song because this definantly had a lot of potential to be a great song, definantly usable in a flash if it gets noticed.

You may want to add drums as well but I could see reasons you wouldn't want to because it might ruin that lonely type of time I thought it had to it so that choice would be up to you. Anyways it was still a very well made songi n my oppinion, it just wasn't living up to its full potential.

Niice =]

The worst part of the song is that the notes kinda clashed, and it was too short!! Keep on working with this song, maybe add in drums and a distored guitar part? Would sound pretty badass.