Great beat

^ what that says ^ but needs to be a little bassy-er. overall very good. not to many layers and not to simple. keep it up : )

Read this!

The beats in the song are held together by the most mentalists notes!

Rawr, gnarly

Even though it misses the thick, fatness I like in my drum & bass (Spor), this does make my head move to the beat.

It's unfinished, yes, but you're showing skills here akin to professional DJs.
I like it.

o_O

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Cool sound doesn't make a good song.

It definitely has some really excellent sound in it, but you failed to put it together into a firmly established song.